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Hidden In The Reef, Amoung The Coral

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"...Young Finnedyrs wait to hatch and see the sun on the sea."
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I'm so happy with how this came out QwO

Tested some new ideas.

Finnedyrs shown:
-Opal (lower left) :iconluciddreamdog:
-Nectar (bottom center) :iconsnappsoup:
-Rahzi (top center) :icondawndaye:
-June (bottom right) :iconkdrfkdrf:
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I apologize beforehand if you find this harsh.

I actually really love this piece! the play on focus, lighting, and effects gives it a mystical feel. I especially love the composition, featuring the bubbles in the center and the curved perspective on the plants in the background.

vision- I could see you had a clear idea of how you wanted it to look, and executed it well.
originality- I haven't seen anything very similar to this before.
technique- this is the only one a bit lower, because although I love how this looks overall, there are a few technique issues that make it feel less "real" for me. Mostly the effect that you used a brush for the plants- i'm not completely sure if you did, but it comes off that way, and has a rather static appearance. I think you could have done something more dynamic with that aspect by varying the appearance of the plants.
impact- I think this is a very immersive piece, it draws you in.

overall, very nice job, and apart from the flaw I pointed out, ther eisn't much improvement to be done!